I Was Walking In Yesterday Poem by Rani Turton

Lady that was a beautiful write, the content was excellent top marks for you my friend 10 Chris x

Wonderful title and concept and so the execution, with a very good rhythm. I like it! Regards, onelia

A big fan of your writes Rani! This is great.

very introspcetive, has a brooding quality- well written

A poem with several classical allusions....one of the best sathya narayana

this is very cool... nice images. I walked into yesterday and it was the friend Whose name I couldn't recall; it was the wanderer's wine Bought at a wayside stall good lines. you have done a fine job with this. an enjoyable read. good job. Crystal

Lovely picture of day dreaming, just remember life is now. Bob

' was walking in yesterday As if yesterday was today And as though the past was alive' An enigma---lovely +10 regards anjali

Such a stress free occupation, thanx for taking me with you regards Tom 10+

Wraiths and city limits- indicate life of the bewildering recent past…the mind wandering aimlessly- no map no location- and recollecting only a bit sweetness, not of much worth to remember- notice the casual way of mentioning of the friend and the way side wine stall…but what actually quenches the thirst of the wandering mind is the cold village well water- a glaring contradiction to the wine symbol…and the mind finally realizing that the present also is not any different either… A poem impressive by its enigmatic elusive presentation style…a very good one, the way I read 10+