I Was Tired Poem by Jessel Jane Tevar Toring

I Was Tired



I saw her again-
brushing her hair
that fell like shiny feathers.
Her eyes had mocked
her solemn face
as though a dagger
has flashed behind her gaze.
She brushed her hair
that fell like shiny feathers
while her eyes had mocked her face.
Her lips do nothing but conceal
the pain that flows like river.
I grew tired watching at her
loneliness that often speaks forever.
I was tired-
so i turned away from the mirror.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Estrella Baldemosa 17 August 2008

ang galing...tsk...

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Bill Smith 10 February 2008

one of the best I have read for some time, enjoyed, thank you smiffy

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