I Was That Girl... Poem by Mary Nagy

I Was That Girl...



I was that girl...in the shadows
of an ever-dying love.
I was that girl...searching for God
just begging for help from above.

I was that girl...in the darkness
trying to find my way.
I was that girl...raised in violence
and then selfishly thrown away.

I was that girl...full of anger
for the past and all of the pain.
I was that girl....but now I'm not
and I'll never be her again.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Bravo, Mary! I was that girl also...and now I'm not either. Let's go celebrate...and laugh...and laugh...and laugh...

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Ernestine Northover 26 September 2005

A very big admittance Mary. Well done on both counts! Sincerely Ernestine.

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Yashar rezaeipour 26 September 2005

do you think you lost your 'self'some where in you!

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Daniel Tyler 26 May 2006

A calm, measured reflection on your past. Well done.

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Jackson Kilroy 30 September 2005

Another one very nicely done

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Uriah Hamilton 27 September 2005

if anyone deserves to overcome, it is Mary!

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Herbert Nehrlich1 26 September 2005

Excellent, Mary. Usually, Spring is dusting time but..... H

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Rickie Elpusan 26 September 2005

Beautiful poem Mary. It sound truely from the heart. Thank you. Rickie

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