I Want You To Guess Poem by Naida Nepascua Supnet

I Want You To Guess

Rating: 5.0


I want you to guess If I have more with less
And I want you to try to guess what makes me high

Right now can you tell what runs in my mind
Do you think I am well if I stay put behind

Because you know me too well you read me so true
And I'm a lousy actress if it's you I talk to

Every twist every move of my lips and my eyes
You can tell right away if what I say are lies

Now you know why I do everything that you do
You are my leader I will follow, till the end me and you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 03 August 2013

in the first two stanzas the speaker(call the speaker you) seems to doubt that he/she/it can read you. but the last three stanzas seem to paint a different picture; they seem to assume nothing is hidden from him/her/it. i really liked the last three stanzas though i was sort of shocked to see a comma (punctuation! ! ! !) in the last line. i don't remember seeing a punctuation mark in the other poems i have read. :) bri

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Melvin Banggollay 10 November 2011

this is a very romantic piece good for you and me

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J Pe 09 November 2011

Nice, straight to the subject.

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Naida Nepascua Supnet

Naida Nepascua Supnet

bayambang, pangasinan, philippines
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