I Want You To Be Mine...... Poem by Ravi Sathasivam

I Want You To Be Mine......

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When the sun shines in my life
then I want you to be my light
When the moon bring romantic nights
then I want you to be my Juliet
When the wind blow his whistle
then I want you to be my dancer
When the ocean calm and pleasant
then I want you to be my love boat
When the rain shower with lightening and thunder
then I want you to be in my arms that surrounded
When the heart thrust for love and pleasure
then I want you to be in my soul
When the dreams brings reality in life
then I want you to be my lady for ever

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Poetry Hound 29 March 2005

Admirable sentiments, but some syntax problems, and the term 'love boat' will have unintended symbolism for Americans as it is the name of a sub-sentient television program.

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