I Want You Poem by hazel jackson

I Want You

Rating: 5.0


your smile your touch the way you feel in more i met you at school and a smile came across my face you asked me of my name and number everytime i dident do anything i wanted to say ask me again after school and you might become my boo now its lunch period and were in different blocks hopefulyl ill see you somewhere your in class and im in the library writing and thinking about you and me so once again let me name a couple of things that made me want you again the way you walk the way you talk the way you feel so unreal i want you i hope you know and i hope you want me also

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 26 November 2019

Well expressed thoughts and feelings nicely brought forth from the heart. An insightful work of art. Thanks for sharing, Hazel.

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James Mclain 17 September 2019

Bri is brutal my dear, But I have to agree that you must make the effort To write ✍ out your work properly. James

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Bri Edwards 16 June 2018

so you wrote this in a note? (a rhetorical question, but feel free to answer) i hope a teacher did not get it (the note) ! and did you get him, and him, YOU! ? i was sort of shy with girls and had 'other reasons' to not get too 'involved' with girls/women until years after high school. now i'm in my fourth marriage! bri :)

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Dr Antony Theodore 12 May 2017

the way you walk the way you talk the way you feel so unreal i want you i hope you know and i hope you want me also.....love, infatuation, attraction. mystery.......... all these are there indirectly knowingly or unknowingly penned. thank you. tony

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