I Want To Propose You! Poem by Geetha Jayakumar
I Want To Propose You!
I really wanted to propose YOU! .....BUT…..
With a beautiful red rose in hand
Stood in a pose to propose,
In the beautiful wintery night.
Time stood as an ice
To reach the beloved.
Gathered all the strength
To break up the ice
But it melted so soon
To his astonishing surprise.
He found himself floating
On top of the ice!
Waited for the autumn day
Stood in a pose to propose
Once again
Time stood as an autumns breeze
To reach his beloved
Blew away all the petals
Just left a stem with thorns in hand!
Waited for the summer
Once again
Stood in a pose to propose
Time stood as summers anger wrath
To reach his beloved
Heat dried up the rose in hand
And he stood motionless in a pool of sweat.
Waited for the rainy day
Once again stood
In a pose with a beautiful rose
Time stood as a
Thundering and lightening
Stood as a wall
To reach his beloved
The storms snatched
Away the rose in hand
Only to be landed in the whirlpool of flood.
Finally
Gathering all the strength and
proposed with all guts
Time stood as a coffin
To reach his beloved
But
Joined hands in prayer
Telling
I want to propose you dear
With all my heart
But the rose
Only to be placed in beloved tomb! ! !
My proposal will look somewhat this way?
This is the only one reason I never proposed anyone!
Still if you want I can propose you! ! !
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© 2014.
Geetha Jayakumar.
Hello Geetha. A very wonderful poem and fun to read. I enjoyed, Loyd
Wow a fantastic poem creativ ways to show we shud propose before its too late i guess. But do ladies propose in yor culture dear?
Do not wait too long is the best advice. Thank you.
Very interesting - the mind thinks to propose but seasons came and the went proposer still waits possibly for the right time but that never came yet. Should I say......... Open your heart opening your eyes and ears and cry out.... you will find some body of choice who will stand by you.
This is the only one reason I never proposed anyone! stop waiting for right time.....just open up your heart! ! ! ! kollamm! ! ! ! Nice one! ! ! ! :)
A very interesting and funny poem with all the seasons so delighfully described in such a humorous way! Great write!
This is beautiful Geetha, thank you for the smiles. Time stood as a coffin, interesting line. Happy new year too!
a v hilarious poem.......every season is nicely portrayed in your lines..........
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Hahaha...this is sweet write also, i like how you end your write, Bollywood romantica there hahaha_Soul