Abdul Wahab


>>>I Want To Die


Heavenly cursed and heavily sinned I
No more i like to add them, so, I want to die
And I want to become a holy ghost
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  • Gold Star - 10,905 Points Soulful Heart (9/14/2014 5:50:00 AM)

    shades of emily dickinson here......yes it wud b great to knw if we were cherished by our loved ones.......after death (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 6,663 Points Amitava Sur (9/7/2014 8:39:00 PM)

    It is a good emotional penning of knowing the value by ending oneself? Then does not prove a hypocrite society who so long did not value a life till the end and at least shedding tears to recognize? ? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 87 Points Luana Del Lobo (7/13/2014 1:38:00 PM)

    Interesting perspective of something that sometimes it's very hard to describe since we only can see one side of the coin...
    Well written! :) (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 21,309 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (7/5/2014 10:22:00 AM)

    death description is good but death is sad. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 96 Points Richard Blay (3/30/2014 4:55:00 PM)

    it's funny and lovely and deadly. good work Abdul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 42 Points Mary Amrutha (3/8/2014 7:34:00 AM)

    I don't in what context you wrote this.. the poem is good actually awesome but the concept is scary (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,675 Points Wahab Abdul (12/6/2013 11:50:00 AM)

    Well crafted, Dark


    Blanca Prior598 days ago
    Given the reality of the times this is a bit depressing, however I feel it brings light to the fact that individuals that commit suicide aren't aware of how much love and support they have because everyone waits until that person is dead to express their true emotions. Although very dark it calls to a positive realization... that you don't know what you have until you lose it. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,675 Points Wahab Abdul (12/6/2013 11:49:00 AM)

    well wriiten


    Andrew Hozempa598 days ago
    this poem is well writen and I find I feel a heavy heart with reading it, but still feel a smile as you can sense his feelings in the words (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,675 Points Wahab Abdul (12/6/2013 11:48:00 AM)

    I love this!


    Regenna Hairston-Grier598 days ago
    This poem reminds me of my childhood in a segregated south, and the very day the carrier brought the news that my fathers oldest Son was killed in Vietnam.... Very well express! (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,675 Points Wahab Abdul (12/6/2013 11:47:00 AM)

    intense


    Dara Bruce598 days ago
    its almost as if you wrote this from beyond the grave, i can tell you do not fear death but welcom ite (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,675 Points Wahab Abdul (12/6/2013 11:46:00 AM)

    Great


    Marwand Bahand595 days ago
    A five star poetry writer. A heart touching poem which feeds your soul (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Emily Taylor (11/5/2013 11:45:00 PM)

    yeah the whole huge space than death death death thing at the end is a bit much (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Yenifer Mendoza (10/15/2013 2:54:00 PM)

    This poem is very deep and i indeed like it. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,675 Points Wahab Abdul (7/16/2013 4:56:00 AM)

    thank you Queeny Gona for your comment (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,675 Points Wahab Abdul (7/14/2013 1:46:00 AM)

    thank you Heather Burns for your comment (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (7/5/2013 9:40:00 AM)

    death is an extension of life. here on earth we just start our journey, but after death we continue on to the end. I believe in life after death. a wise and lovely poem we are fulfilling our mission in life. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 158 Points Queeny Gona (7/24/2012 8:05:00 AM)

    Voted 10+++++ Sir, I hardly seen anybody defaming a person after his/her death. And coming to family, one can know how much he/ she means to them! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Rigzin Namgyal (5/15/2012 10:21:00 PM)

    ..death...through the wizard of words....abdul wahab...
    ..i never knew death could be so beautiful...
    ..no wonder..if sleep which is a picture of death is so sweet..how much beautiful death must be...d saying goes.. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,675 Points Wahab Abdul (5/8/2012 7:33:00 AM)

    this poem stood first on poetry.com (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Nizar Sartawi (3/24/2012 12:57:00 PM)

    This is a lovely poem indeed. Thanks for inviting me. (Report) Reply



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