Jahan zaib

Rookie - 70 Points (February 05,1981 / Malakand Pakistan)

I want to be there


I want to be there

When you feel alone and feel like crying,
No one is there to offer a shoulder,
Nothing you receive but scolding, denying,
I want to be there, to offer you,
All the things you needd.

When the world seems dark, and no hope is there,
Everyone leaves you in isolation, where no one is there,
To be next to you, Holding your hand,
offering his, to be held and be bold,
I want to be there, For You and with you.

Jahanzeb

Submitted: Monday, February 06, 2012

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  • Gold Star - 13,873 Points * Sunprincess * (11/12/2012 11:55:00 PM)

    love the message this poem sends..caring and love..fabulous (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 320 Points Poetheart Morgan (11/10/2012 2:57:00 PM)

    your way to love is a friendly caress. beautiful and endearing! ! ! Beautiful! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stevie Taite (10/18/2012 11:48:00 AM)

    This shows what a caring soul you are. I hope they accept your loving offer, and that you can help them be happy (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 103 Points Persian Khushi (10/5/2012 11:44:00 AM)

    hmmm so much said abt yourself in this verse. loving, beautiful heart. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Farah Ilyas (2/26/2012 10:28:00 AM)

    physical existance is not meant, it is ur words ur emotion ur love ur care that have meaning...really a nice marvellous poem...: -) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 76 Points Diana Rosser (2/15/2012 2:12:00 PM)

    Thank you for inviting me to read your poem, I am sorry that it has taken so long. I really enjoyed reading this thoughtful write. (Report) Reply

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