I Want A Way Out.. Poem by Kirti Sharma

I Want A Way Out..

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I want a way out of my problems
and i cry everyday for a solution
i pray, i pray long,
wondering that someone would listen.
But in my problems, i get so blind,
I lose my humanity, I lose that very simple smile.
I don't think about others and their troubles
I get so selfish.
I'm into me, don't think how they may feel.
My senses get inactive,
I'm no more sensitive.
No, I don't care much about them.

Sunday, June 15, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: lost
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
when problems are so many that there is no time to think about anything or anybody!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lorraine Colon 02 July 2014

It's difficult to care about others when you are suffering. You should not feel guilty. You are allowed to feel sorry for yourself and find a solution for your problems. It's not good to become completely self-absorbed, but a little attention paid to yourself is certainly allowed and expected. If you're unable to smile, you cannot help others to be happy. Nicely expressed poem.

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Amitava Sur 27 June 2014

Keep up your realization alive and that itself will take you a long way ahead.... very nice

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Geetha Jayakumar 22 June 2014

Beautiful poem Kirti. You have poured your heart here. Very true said, we often feels we have only problems and it is too big. Loved it.

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Akhtar Jawad 19 June 2014

a nice and heart shaking write.

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