I Want Poem by Edie Moy

I Want

Rating: 3.1


I want you to be there
When I fall,
See it all,
Feel it all
I want you to shred the tears with me
Show me you care
Love me the most at my lowest
Make me feel safe in your arms
Hold me tight until I am up from the bottom
It does not matter if you are by me every second
I just want you by me when I fall

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 19 February 2015

Standing beside one when one is at lowest ebb of life is a make of true friendship. A nice poem, well articulated and written with insight. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Awa Bah 10 April 2014

When I fall, See it all, Feel it all emotional, its good.

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Gajanan Mishra 25 April 2013

show me you care, very good poem.

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