I Wait For You Poem by Viola Grey
I Wait For You
While others remain
slaves to bitter emotions,
tormenting their pride
with hollow dreams....
I wait for you.
As sad, sickened hearts
reach for each other,
poisoning souls
once alive with promise....
I wait for you.
While they tear the flesh
of tormented passion,
devour black clouds
of unwanted truth....
I wait for you.
So, let them swim
in cold, dark waters,
allow them to float
towards lusts faint gloom....
I'll wait for you.
10/5/08
Admittedly Love is Lust... only in higher phase! Love gives emotional happiness while satisfy the flesh of which we are made of! ONLY HYPOCRITES DO NOT ADMIT THEY ARE HUMAN! a 10.
I'm confuzed, you put 10/05/08, but today is only 5/10/08. i'm in a song mood, and i think that if the right people did it and there was a chorus added, it would be awesome. maybe combine stanzas 1 and 2 as verse 1, and 3 and 4 as verse 2. this is just a suggestion, not an attack. ps. i rated it a whopping 10! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! 1
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4/19/2024 9:40:45 AM # 1.0.0.1119
There is nothing left to say, this is great Viola Grey. I give it a 10...