I'Ve Lost Sensation Poem by Rania Hammoud

Only time will tell, this is a well penned poem, heart touching, keep it up, it is just the beginning,10+++

Nice poem and rhyming. The words are used in a nice manner. Maybe some spacing and divisions are needed to make the poem separated into a sequence of thoughts, so it would be easy for the reader to digest. Great work.

a rich poem, nicely made shan

you convey your emotions quite beautifully Rania, i can sense your pain (or lack of it, -numbness, anesthesia)

wow i like this, i can relate. very moving. nicely done rania

Very sad feelings. Cheer up, poet!

You have poignantly expressed a feeling of pain and suffering. But why is so much sadness? Relish it? Or just getting relieved of it? At your age such sad feelings occasionally overtake people. Dont worry. But as a poet u have done ur job excellently.

A very painful and desperate feeling....but yes, you have to' take a turning and go somewhere else'this is much better...Very Good poem Rania. A TEN! !

i quote: '' Take a turning, And go somewhere else ''.. here we are waiting to read your poems, that what i can witness ! !

Good poem, I liked it. 10 out of 10.