I've Come Home Poem by Piccola Topo Gigio

I've Come Home

Rating: 4.5


There's not a moment,
As peaceful, and so close,
As when we're sleeping.

Our bodies,
Looking for the warmth,
Of one another.

Our subconscious,
Looking for confirmation,
Of the presence of the other.

No moment,
I look more forward to,
Than that.

No moment,
That gives me so much peace,
As that.

And not a moment,
That puts me so at ease,
As that.




*Original version from September 16,2011

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 13 April 2018

Passionate love poem, a smooth flow for joy. Lovely creation, well conceived and elegantly penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing.

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Samantha Belsey 10 April 2015

I enjoyed this poem very much, it has a calming relaxing feel as you read it and a lovely sentiment behind it.

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Piccola Topo Gigio 13 April 2015

I'm glad you enjoyed it Samantha. For it is exactly what I tried to convey with it; the calmness from within at such point... :)

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Kelly Kurt 10 April 2015

A beautiful poem, Gina. Thanks for sharing

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Piccola Topo Gigio 13 April 2015

And thank you once more, for this nice compliment too, Kurt.

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