There's not a moment,
As peaceful, and so close,
As when we're sleeping.
Our bodies,
Looking for the warmth,
Of one another.
Our subconscious,
Looking for confirmation,
Of the presence of the other.
No moment,
I look more forward to,
Than that.
No moment,
That gives me so much peace,
As that.
And not a moment,
That puts me so at ease,
As that.
*Original version from September 16,2011
I enjoyed this poem very much, it has a calming relaxing feel as you read it and a lovely sentiment behind it.
I'm glad you enjoyed it Samantha. For it is exactly what I tried to convey with it; the calmness from within at such point... :)
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Passionate love poem, a smooth flow for joy. Lovely creation, well conceived and elegantly penned from the heart. Thanks for sharing.