Treasure Island

Sadvansha Munshi

(24th March'99 / Kanpur)

I, Unleal?


Is it up to me?
Why do feelings change?
I just want to be free,
Is it out of my range?

Am I being a criminal,
For feeling this way?
We were so official
But now for us I don't have anything to say

I, Unleal?
I am just being truthful.
There is a truth which I want to reveal,
I'm sorry I was not faithful..

I followed my heart,
Then why is it aching with guilt? ..
What I wanted was to be apart,
Then what is this strange feeling which is built?

I am across the river of drama,
Still I am a little wet with it's water?
Both of us has this trauma,
Need a recovery light to scatter....

I, Unleal?
I am just being truthful.
There is a truth which I want to reveal,
I'm sorry I was not faithful..

Submitted: Monday, February 17, 2014
Edited: Monday, February 17, 2014

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  • Donnie Wolff (2/26/2014 10:37:00 AM)

    I learned something new today, unleal, I like it. As far as your writing, excellent. (Report) Reply

  • Ed Nigma (2/24/2014 10:40:00 PM)

    What does unleal mean? Anyways, good poem admitting ones guilt and apologizing is good yet the effects of unfaithfulness still sting and carry a bitter tone for both.

    Keep Poetry Alive!
    Allan Gerard~ (Report) Reply

  • Vizard Dhawan (2/23/2014 10:15:00 AM)

    The poem starts with a strong impact and gradually shines over the edge show a bit your maturity..! ! ! ! !

    Great stuff......! ! ! (Report) Reply

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