I Tried To Sum........ Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Tried To Sum........

Rating: 4.9


I tried to sum up the day
Could not think the way
Was it so gainful with joy?
Did I pass it and fully enjoy?

It was normal and casual
Activities so so and as usual
Same way of fooling around
Always new search and catch found

I take so much pride
Emotions and plan always hide
Boosting as if jump and can ride
Always secretive and matters confide

Nothing that I pursue and do different
Intentions may look honest and apparent
Even I may not spare own parent
I take it as new and fresh event

I do it with cleaver move
Any dangers easily remove
Capabilities day by day improve
Nothing to hide and nothing to prove

You may disapprove and hate
I can’t afford to be looser and late
Got to go along with the show
Whole might or weight has to throw

It may not prove difficult either
Storm may come and wither
I shall stand as lone winner
Though conscious may bite from inner

No words can exert the influence
Surely to have no road blocks hence
Success may touch the highest peak
May be considered strong and not merely a weak

I may not worry about another world
Showing indifference with lukewarm and cold
All my initiatives will be clear and bold
Complete sway with control and hold

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Natasha Rathod 23 August 2009

to ascertain the gain....10

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Vinod Karmakar 23 August 2009

why should i worry about others.......10

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Umesh Lalvani 24 August 2009

I tried to sum up the day Could not think the way... good write...10

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Kashi Paul 24 August 2009

It was normal and casual Activities so so and as usual Same way of fooling around.....10

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Reshma Punjabi 24 August 2009

You may disapprove and hate I can’t afford to be looser and late Got to go along with the show.....10

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Ramdulari Sinha 28 August 2009

take so much pride Emotions and plan always hide Boosting as if jump and can ride......10

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K.v. Subbarao 27 August 2009

tried to sum up the day Could not think the way Was it so gainful with joy? .....10

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Darshna Chopra 27 August 2009

It was normal and casual Activities so so and as usual......10

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Severina Dsouza 26 August 2009

do it with cleaver move Any dangers easily remove Capabilities day by day improve....10

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Lalvani Rekha 26 August 2009

Boosting as if jump and can ride Always secretive and matters confide.....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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