brianna young

I Thought I Loved You - Poem by brianna young

i thought i loved you but then you broke my heart
i thought i loved you but then you just slapped a band-aid over it,
and then it broke into more pieces
i thought i loved you when you said 'forever and ever baby'
but i should of known that was a lie
i thought i loved you when you kissed me,
but no matter how much i dont love you my heart always does! ! !

Comments about I Thought I Loved You by brianna young

  • Rookie Vandavasu Vittal (10/16/2009 12:13:00 AM)

    A smart poignant love poem. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 184 Points Yoonoos Peerbocus (5/19/2009 10:01:00 PM)

    ideas are wisely selected to hoist up the tone/mood/nice diction too (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Barbara Jean (5/14/2009 9:05:00 AM)

    I love it, this poem describe how i feel about my ex. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Matt Hartwell (1/16/2009 1:53:00 PM)

    good writing. but you should rewrite it with words that rhyme but mean the same. but then again it might be perfect the way it is. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, January 16, 2009

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