I Suspect …. Poem by SALINI NAIR

I Suspect ….



In a dense forest I wandered
On the wings of pensiveness
Crazy branches embrace themselves
Whisper around and resonates

Invader their side they suspects
Haziness may be in queue
Stripe of image in a stream nearby
Query that pursues on line

Array of trees are in zigzag
They still murmur and enhancing
Noticed the bushes gaze at loner
Intercept the march at stream side

There a breeze tattle and passed by
Pat the greenery on its way
They bop its side with gratitude
As it conveys love of nature

Loner peeps inside and whispered
Suspicion is the base of human nature
Interpret all in numerous ways
Hazardous ways that unveil itself! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Friday, November 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: nature
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 07 November 2014

Beautiful poem composed wonderfully with the beauty of nature narrated so beautifully......amazing piece

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Kee Thampi 07 November 2014

a lovable sweet poem There a breeze tattle and passed by and meadow of greenery and shadow of moon

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Akhtar Jawad 07 November 2014

This world is a forest and its inhabitants appear in zigzag arrays, at every step of our life we suspect someone, and we thinkt moving towards him may be hazardous, although he may be sincere to us. That is how I understood this poem. I confess it's not easy to understand the poems of Salini and I may be completely wrong. I think Saliny should be kind enough to favor her readers with a poet's note.

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Amitava Sur 14 November 2014

Getting lost in the dense forest in it's zigzag, possibly Suspicion is the base of human nature ......... this is the gist of your penning.

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Edward Kofi Louis 12 November 2014

Beautiful! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

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Valsa George 09 November 2014

Through a beautiful forest scene, you have brought out a basic human nature of suspecting everything! Like Akhtarji.... I too experience the same difficulty in understanding your poems! Salini, each time I read your poems I wish if they were accompanied with the poet's note...! I have difficulty in understanding some of the words you use.... they are beyond my vocabulary!

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Salini Nair 09 November 2014

Akhtar sir your interpretation is accurate...we approach everything with suspicion...even in a dense forest we doubt trees …from the background of a dense forest I want to say that ….thanks

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Salini Nair 09 November 2014

Akhtar sir your interpretation is accurate...we approach everything with suspicion...even in a dense forest we doubt trees …from the background of a dense forest I want to say that ….thanks

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