I Start Poem by abbas abubakar

I Start

Rating: 3.5


I start
In your Name O Lord
The begining of milestone

I start
With a voice, treble
Far into caves and woods

I start
With ink of the soul
Gushing pure feeling from nest

I start
With sword in my bossom
Trending through path of haunted forest

I start
With heat of treamour
To break cones of wretchedness

I start
Not to tears
But with tears of many years

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Junaid Ahmed 16 July 2013

Dear Abbas, very nice poem. I like It. I suggest you to do just a little change in last line of the poem, is that: But with tears of many years in my heart.

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