I Shall Adore Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
I Shall Adore
If someone asks me honestly
I shall reply about it instantly
Those eyes had troubled and fascinated
My ideas about beauty was from there originated
Those were initial days
I had known no poetry and it was far away
She flashed across scene
And I was flat on ground to be seen
She guided me to the perfect imagery
That was all felt as need and necessary
We had perfect understanding with bond
She was my guide and I was very much fond
I could see her not beyond veil
It utter disgust and I failed
Then luck could not find any alternative
I was thrown away by reason that one won't believe
She is back after many years
I refused to believe ears
She is same familiar name
I used to boost and claim
I had seen her powerful eyes
She was always in veil so forbidden to try
She never budged for granting picture
She always smiled" it secret and my future"
I did remind her of my desire
But she will turn down and admire
I hoped to find her in mood
That day never turned out to be good
All those were turbulent days
We did not find any way
She had her own dreams and expectations
Searching for stable and permanent relation
I am promised with her picture
I shall see it as lost moments for sure
She occupies highest position as ever
I shall adore her whenever find and forever
Let her occupy the highest position as ever for you adore her which is reflected so well in your excellent write. Thanks & best wishes.
tony right11 hours ago i tried to get your voice and find a flow, i get the poem, the theme is good, but it needs to be revived picture and sure doesn't rhyme...take no offense, i'm just trying to be honest and help
Heather Burns your quatrains each tell a lovely little story. I'll read again soon. h
WOW! ! ! Nicole Wallace1 hour ago The love and loss and victory of faith is very prominent in your poem. I couldn't help but love it. Comment +1 Love it! ! ! !
Antoinette Townsend11 hours ago I normally enjoy the poems that rhyme a lot but I have found out that a poem does not have to rhyme from line to line! ! ! I love this! ! ! Comment 1 Comment0
Some Girl Nicely told story :) 0 I would love to hear this recited
Will Dennis11 hours ago I feel that me actually reading it doesnt do it justice. This is a performance piece! Good work Comment 0 me too
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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If someone asks me honestly I shall reply about it instantly