I Sell My Soul Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Sell My Soul

Rating: 4.9


“My soul and body for sale “
Offer from fish to a big whale,
When saw a big danger face went pale,
But indeed plain truth and not simple tale,

I can’t grow any more,
Nor can I protect in downpour,
Never faced worst ever this before,
Broken at heart and body lay tore,

I may not offer or even fight,
Find no candle even there no light,
Situation may be worse or even tight,
Worries may be more solution not in sight,

Tough it prove life may prove hard,
Can’t keep it away or off may ward,
Still it may remain, close I may eyes,
Nor it may vanish even I make byes,

I may boost big and promise tall make,
Handle it with ease and eat like cake,
Shaken from within when face rough,
Resolve may shrink when task find tough,

Still I may not relent, and also lament,
But loose I may ground and offer no comment,
I may collect thread and wave it neat,
Try to project success and excellent feat,

Had it been in reach, I may hold good,
Last I may more even without food,
But alas! I am gone and face defeat,
I may loose ground and may retreat,

Still I may hold firm and loose not grip,
Dark may not deter even light may trip,
I still stand fast and put brave front,
Odd may not give in I may more confront,

But as I said I just cave in,
Future lay barren and I shatter within,
I can’t offer more than body and soul,
Life proved hard and I feel foul,

So do I offer soul and body sale,
Story may not find well with male,
But it may find favour and also flavour,
I may keep it low but it will clamour

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vinod Karmakar 05 August 2009

dejection in life lead to such stage...10

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Shilpa Maheswari 07 August 2009

very negative n dejected views....10

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Santoksingh Jadeja 07 August 2009

very dejective tendency....10

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Kamli Kamal 08 August 2009

life not evaluated propely...10

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Kunwar Patel 09 August 2009

who will take ur soul and body......10

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Prof. Dr. Sakti Chakravorty 14 September 2009

Push-Pull type poem! ‘still stand fast and put brave front, ’ a push ‘But alas! I am gone and face defeat, ‘ a pull. Enjoyed Sir. Ten+ dr. sakti

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Indani Narayan 17 August 2009

i may still survive....10

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Lalvani Rekha 16 August 2009

so much despair n dejection....10

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Pami Panchal 15 August 2009

so much dejection in life....10

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Sulochna Pandit 10 August 2009

expressions are out of despair....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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