ramesh rai

Gold Star - 12,633 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

I Searched You - Poem by ramesh rai

I searched you in Mosque, Church,
temple, Gurudwara, and at so many places
where you are being chanted
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Comments about I Searched You by ramesh rai

  • Gold Star - 8,715 Points Lyn Paul (4/17/2015 7:30:00 PM)

    Wonderful Words presented here and to save. As much as I loved your words I found the word Whore unpleasant.
    AS There may not be a choice in their lives.
    I searched you Ramesh. Good luck with your book. How lovely it was reading your profile. Thank You (Report) Reply

    Gold Star - 12,633 Points Ramesh Rai (4/17/2015 9:35:00 PM)

    Thank you so much

    1 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • Rookie - 234 Points Jacson Gelato (2/10/2015 4:48:00 AM)

    Isn't it sheer profanity? (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,365 Points Khalida Bano Ali (1/24/2015 9:50:00 AM)

    A great divine poem......................10 (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,119 Points Darlene Walsh (10/11/2014 10:16:00 PM)

    God is everywhere, and in everything. He is in all of His creation. So few people can see this. Your poem expresses this beautifully.

    Darla :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 54 Points J.s. Shankar (9/28/2014 1:54:00 AM)

    So nice... The god is everywhere. You may call him Brahma or anything else but it scatters its boon all over the world in same manner. The imagery of bringing the whore under the same consoling powers of God makes it special. How can the sinners be left out for they also to be attended the dooms day? (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 88 Points Jonathan Maldonado (9/25/2014 2:11:00 PM)

    A beautiful sentiment of the difference between religion and God, for man created religion thus it divides, judges, damns, and even hates for what is war but a manifestation of hate. Whereas, God simply creates, loves, forgives, redeems, and exaults lifting spirit and soul to a higher consciousness. Great write, thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 12,633 Points Ramesh Rai (1/29/2014 10:03:00 AM)

    Jarrod C Lacy
    I just read your piece on Poemhunter,
    Ramesh. Astoundingly raw and
    beautiful in its imagery.
    Congratulations on your win. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 672 Points Mike Barrett (12/26/2013 10:06:00 AM)

    Ramesh,

    You've captured reality - God (IT) - is everywhere and in all things all the time and eternally. A beautiful write - thanks for sharing!

    A lot of the poetry flowing through me captures the same theme, the same truth.

    Cheers & keep on channeling! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Mark Kevin Piañar (12/10/2013 6:20:00 AM)

    i feel the poem, congrats (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 230 Points Crystal Rosser (12/9/2013 11:25:00 AM)

    Enchanting and enlightening. Sensible in many ways tough would have liked to felt more mystery and god-like intensity in this poem. The ideas and visualization of God brings about so much mystery from the unknown. Overall, nicely done. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ravindra Kumar (12/4/2013 3:38:00 AM)

    Presentation of the Lord in various natural aspects is depicted. Congratulations. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Deepak Trivedi (11/27/2013 8:18:00 AM)

    I like it very much...All creations are the gift of God and God lives in it....Congratulation for winning the prize...! !
    - -Deepak Trivedi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samarendranath Mahapatra (11/24/2013 3:47:00 AM)

    Congratulation for winning. This is a nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Samarendranath Mahapatra (11/24/2013 3:47:00 AM)

    Congratulation for winning. This is a nice poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Ambrosia A (11/22/2013 10:38:00 PM)

    congrats, you deserve it! this is a masterpiece (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,675 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (11/22/2013 10:25:00 AM)

    Congratulations on your win! ! Great poem.I was away for awhile and I didn't know about this contest...Wonderfully thoughtful poem.... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,675 Points Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black (11/22/2013 10:25:00 AM)

    Congratulations on your win! ! Great poem.I was away for awhile and I didn't know about this contest...Wonderfully thoughtful poem.... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 39 Points Malini Kadir (11/14/2013 6:02:00 AM)

    beautiful! your search is enlightening in itself...... (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 687 Points Sally Plumb Plumb (11/14/2013 1:36:00 AM)

    Enlightening piece of work (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Byegon Kims (11/12/2013 6:03:00 AM)

    Wonderful poem. Congratulations for your win you deserve it. (Report) Reply










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