I Saw You As I`ve Never Seen Before Poem by Valerie Dohren

I Saw You As I`ve Never Seen Before

Rating: 5.0


I saw you as I`ve never seen before
The moon upon your lovely face did play
Your eyes as starlight fixed on heaven`s door
So sparkled at the closing of the day

Then softly in the golden fires of dawn
Your smile shone brighter than my eyes have seen
To greet me as an angel in the morn` -
O sweeter than it yet had ever been

Your voice was like a songbird set in flight
Enchanting all my mind and sorrowed heart
Which soars above the land in gay delight -
Sweet music of the world to thus impart

And greatly was your countenance defined
As `gainst the azure skies it was then set
It lingered as a vision in my mind -
O I am yet so glad that we have met

Entranced with all your beauty is my soul
I ne`er will ever feel such joy again -
My weary heart forever to console
And tender love eternal to sustain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Heather Wilson 20 September 2012

So enchanting Val, this poem shows such heartfelt love, and such a pleasure to read.

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Stevie Taite 30 September 2012

I love your Style of poetry! ! ! They are flawless! This is yet another example and makes me want to read it again just because it is so beautiful (rather than having to fathom it out) x. I aspire to be as good as you!

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Payal Parande 20 September 2012

so beautiful and mesmerizing...mam your every poem is like sweet bewitching melody to me..this piece is glorious, magnificent....and so many beautiful things... thank you so much for sharing love, payal

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Joseph Anderson 20 September 2012

A grand and precious awakening and when the morrow comes it shall be even better. Your muse has returned, better than ever

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Danny Draper 20 September 2012

A beautiful loving and compassionate poem of adoration and the love of one to know another so well in intricate and careful description and emotion. Uplifting and celebratory of lasting dear love.

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Siyabonga A Nxumalo 23 June 2013

Great poem as always Valerie, great imagery too. Siya_! !

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 15 November 2012

Eloquent, brilliant, and truly inspiring.

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Akanksha Bhatt 30 September 2012

its beautiful. i really liked this one! its a humble request to you to read mine also and dropp your comments...!

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Hazel Durham 30 September 2012

A great heartfelt poem full of beautiful imagery, amazing write!

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Stevie Taite 30 September 2012

And now I read the sadness of that last look at breathing flesh and I have she'd a tear. Still beautiful.

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