I Saw The Hell Poem by Kateryna Polishchuk

I Saw The Hell

Rating: 4.5


Today I woke up with unhappy mood,
I was upset and felt myself too ill,
I was asleep and still in darkness stood,
I understood my fear should I kill.
I saw the Hell in night dream till the noon,
I saw dead people who were watching me.
I went alone but met an Angel soon,
He was not dark, not light and almost free.
He showed me way my friends have ever been,
He showed mistakes and pain in their eyes.
He said to me my soul had I clean
And went to dreams when my heart even cries.
He told me be a conduit between light,
He asked not try to go away from him,
To choose the ways in my life which are bright,
Forever with my mind in kindness swim.
I saw the Hell I heard too many cries,
I looked at pain of all broken hearts…
I ate my nightmare with an awful spice,
I saw like dolls were playing their parts.
They smiled and sang with ugly laud voice,
They looked like robots lived without mind.
They couldn`t run because they had no choice,
They loved no one but tried the feelings find.
I was afraid and took the Angel`s hand,
I asked to leave that dark unhappy place.
I did not want believe it was the end…
I saw the Earth`s forever lonely face.
I woke up then and tried to understand
What should I write to change my own way.
'We are by you', the silent voices say,
'You live in hell but go to heaven may…'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

i love it bravo! ! !

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Wahab Abdul 25 February 2012

Very good poetic imagination and good crafting of the poem.

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Gordon Tseng 24 February 2012

Light it up in your heart And no longer feel dark!

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Madan M 23 February 2012

heavenly poem for a dreaming soul may take many months, to clear this haze, dreams of gold, white nights in satin too, cradled in your love, I'm just a beat away from you

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Harindhar Reddy 23 February 2012

Surprising world where the poetess Polischuk lives, It is her own domain, she has room of herself. You will know her spirit if simply read this poem. She dreams like everyone but only difference they are variant and vibrant)))))))))))))))))) To the poet, Hots off!

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