I Saw An Angel Poem by Asif Baloch

I Saw An Angel

Rating: 4.8


A mother wearing dark
Black cloth
Waiting, weeping and searching
For her child
Gathering rose petals from
Divested ground
I saw an angel who spread
All around

Pity and sorrow written allover
Their face
Limbed, paralyzed and destroyed
Forfeit by human race
But still they smile with
Playful eyes
I saw an angel who
Forgot to fly

Sitting on the ground with
Worn out cloths
Playing with toys thou made
Of shells and stones
Sitting in a car of
Imaginary ride
I saw an angel playing
Seek and hide

Hunger and poverty
As fate destined
Desperate need for just
Single bite
Standing by the window of
Shimmering lights
I saw an angel who
Ran of fright

The greed for more power
And black gold
Knowing its not rite
But they hide in their pride
They are human but no
Humanity left inside
I saw an angel who falls
Every moment and
Weep with painful cry

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 14 October 2008

a great write..nice theme...good verses... Ency Bearis

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 14 October 2008

I believe by reading more top notch poetry would definitely strengthen your writing.all the best to you in your future writes.

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Chitra - 14 October 2008

I too see an angel of grace in these lines

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Seema Chowdhury 14 October 2008

another wonderful composition. selection of words are excellent and words are thought provoking.

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Evaughn Gray 14 October 2008

that's so sad and heartbreaking... for me it's crying like you had black tears running down your cheeks.. heartbreaking piece..~Love Hazel

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Shiza Khan 25 October 2008

great one.. well expressed

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C T Heart 23 October 2008

great angel... poetically expressed well. a 10.

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Angels are always with us and we see them in the great and small.Beautiful.A ten

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Ashraful Musaddeq 18 October 2008

I love your angel. This is a poem for mankind. Lovely work. 10+

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Gargi Saha 18 October 2008

A very meaningful &suggestive poem. Well done u get 10++

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