I Sat By Poem by CAROL HUGHES

I like the way you have used rhyme in your first stanza, but your have not allowed it to control or restrict the flow and content of the rest of your poem. You have given your readers a fresh look at 24 hours. We all need the hope of a new me every day, no matter how great the 'weather' was the day before. Tom

I like your quiet way of expressing a feeling that touches.

good work! ! ! hope you'll write more and we will read more of your work. read my poems if you want. i have posted more than 300 poems.

Full of deep meaning - well written. Succinct and to the point. An up and coming poet laureate, a rising star. Looking forward to reading more of your poetry.

Very nice, Carol. I enjoyed your insight very much, thanks. Best, Don

a poem about one who has given up on giving up- beautifully and subtly written. Thank You

A sad yet hopeful poem. Do't we all wish our lives away in some fashion. This was a nice write and had a nice flow. I liked the tones of encouragment in the end. Well done

Every new day dawning is a new you Carol........you're full of gems......deep within you...............man a many, sort for!

The art of savoring what one has....is the basis of self-worth. Nothing else..is promised!

but there is always... tomorrow awaiting.... you are tooooooo good. i love your selection of words. well done.