I Remember You Poem by amit yadav

I Remember You

Rating: 3.5


whenever i sing i remember you.
whenever i murmur i remember you..
whenever i wear something i remember you..
whenever i go somewhere i remember you.
whenever i get something i remember you.
i stay close everyday, in your memories...

Monday, June 23, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: friendship
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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Yu-ying Lee 23 June 2014

This is a great and emotive poem. Perhaps you could add a bit more?

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Cleveland Gibson 23 June 2014

It is a very short poem that needs the internal voice lifted. And write the other side of the coin: what happens when you foget a Birthday, a date, buying a present, etc IMO. What happens then?

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amit yadav

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lucknow(uttar pradesh)
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