I Remember Poem by Kristin F

I Remember

Rating: 5.0


i walked down the road
with a pen in my hand

i remember so long ago
when our eyes first met
i remember so long ago
when i first called out your name

i remember so long ago
when we first held hands
i remember so long ago
when we first kissed

i remember so long ago
the promises you made under the stars
i remember so long ago
you were there for me when i needed you


i remember not long ago
we drifted apart
i remember not long ago
you broke my heart

i remember
so much love used to be there
now, it's all vanished

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
nomad omnia 11 March 2009

This evokes very clear pictures...well written, Kristen. N

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Katherine Ng Li Hoon 09 January 2009

I felt very sorry that this person beak your heart but keep strong and some day someone true and sincere will come into your life! That is my best and sincere wish to you from my heart!

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Rudy Hossam 31 December 2008

very touching...almost brought tears to me eyes...and I'm sorry to hear it was so easy for someone to break your heart so easily...very well written

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John Walls 31 December 2008

Crescendo to candence, such is love it seems. Well written -John

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