ramesh rai

Gold Star - 19,816 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

I Realised - Poem by ramesh rai

I realised your arrival
when you knocked at the door of my heart
south wind told me yesterday
you were likely to come
I knew it you would come
like the gale brings a storm with her
lighting being followed by thnder
the black cloud can never replace
the azure sky once formed

I'm waiting for your arrival
you are to be followed by good fortune
It'd change your screaming to a mild smile

Rain is now tired to flood the earth
certainly it has to drizzle.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about I Realised by ramesh rai

  • Veteran Poet - 1,521 Points Chris G. Vaillancourt (5/5/2014 1:20:00 PM)

    what a great poem......loved this piece! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 36,824 Points * Sunprincess * (4/27/2014 3:35:00 AM)

    ........I love the rainy days....give me some lightning and thunder and it's ten times better....enjoyed this wonderful write... (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,262 Points Geetha Jayakumar (4/26/2014 12:58:00 PM)

    Beautiful poem. Beautiful way you have compared weather and relationship.Very true said we sense something before anything comes. It may be good or bad. Loved reading each lines.

    Thank you Sir for the inspiring comments for my poems. It definitely increase my confidence. Thanks a lot. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/25/2014 5:59:00 AM)

    A nice poem, that builds a bridge between weather and relationship...........
    Silence is often followed by a storm.........
    Its good to look over the pros and cons of a relationship..............it may end not end always end in eternity
    A thoughtful write sir...... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 40 Points Tanya Gupta (4/21/2014 5:39:00 AM)

    its amazing..... keep writing
    come to my page and give me your revies (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 18,814 Points Mr. Agape (4/20/2014 6:06:00 PM)

    I know women like that!

    Nice! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 11,718 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (4/20/2014 3:55:00 PM)

    Nice expectation of the arrival. It makes one prepared. Beautiful song. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (4/15/2014 8:23:00 PM)

    Comment to I realized (Box says, A molodious song)
    I have a quetion about next to last line, (rain is now tired to flood the earth)
    Should it be tried or tired, I am unclear at this point.
    I love the connection between weather and relationship. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, April 15, 2014

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