I Realised Poem by ramesh rai

I Realised

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I realised your arrival
when you knocked at the door of my heart
south wind told me yesterday
you were likely to come
I knew it you would come
like the gale brings a storm with her
lighting being followed by thnder
the black cloud can never replace
the azure sky once formed

I'm waiting for your arrival
you are to be followed by good fortune
It'd change your screaming to a mild smile

Rain is now tired to flood the earth
certainly it has to drizzle.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 20 April 2014

Nice expectation of the arrival. It makes one prepared. Beautiful song. Thank you.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 05 May 2014

what a great poem......loved this piece!

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Geetha Jayakumar 26 April 2014

Beautiful poem. Beautiful way you have compared weather and relationship.Very true said we sense something before anything comes. It may be good or bad. Loved reading each lines. Thank you Sir for the inspiring comments for my poems. It definitely increase my confidence. Thanks a lot.

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Yash Shinde 25 April 2014

A nice poem, that builds a bridge between weather and relationship........... Silence is often followed by a storm......... Its good to look over the pros and cons of a relationship..............it may end not end always end in eternity A thoughtful write sir......

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Tanya Gupta 21 April 2014

its amazing..... keep writing come to my page and give me your revies

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Chuy Amante 20 April 2014

I know women like that! Nice!

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