I Pledge My Love Poem by louis rams
I Pledge My Love
in my heart love stepped inside
and you could hear the battle cry.
because of your love, i have lost my head
i turn and toss each night in bed.
it is said that our love is strong and true
and there is nothing that we have to do.
so i went and bought this ring
it is only the proper thing.
i feel your fire when i hold you tight
and i want to squeese you with all my might.
but i also know that if you smother
then you may search for another.
so i give you the space to breathe
and show my love in between.
i'll buy you flowers and give you a card
that will show you whats in my heart.
i had asked you to come close to me
and let your arms surround me.
let me feel all that's in your heart
and to assure me that we'll never part.
i pledge my soul and heart to you
and to you, i'll be true.
as true as the stars are to the sky
and as the moon to the night
you'll be in my heart day and night.
i pledge that my love will exceed your wildest dreams
and my love will grow taller than the highest mountain
and deeper than the deepest sea.
until that day that you say i do
i will respect and honor you.
you are the blood that flows through my brain
and without you, i'll never be the same.
Very sincere, loving words that create thoughts from a true heart. Romantic and cherishing, truly a love felt very deep. Written in an honorable way, expressing feelings of a caring soul. Nicely done. DC
Louis the beauty of this poem..is it's passion for life...it's tone is soothing it holds the reader in a state of calmness...as always my friend..a joyful 10+++
Beautiful love poem nicely embellished with poetic rhyme and rhythm. Very heartfelt with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing and do remain enriched.
A good confession of love. Your ingedients are good especially the idea of not 'smothering' the freely given love of the other when it's so easy to do so.
I also know that you may smother This will attempt you to search for another These two lines let me know that this is a perfect love poem between two who care and respect each other deeply. What a great life to be in 10++
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I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 5:55:08 AM # 1.0.0.1119
hey.. hey.. be careful not to put her before God..........ok.