I Need You Poem by Johar Altaf

I Need You

Rating: 2.5


'Why this heart dwell free?

why we live in segments?

why mine essence such;

I am living underact;

I am telling repeatedly

I need you.


Mine rapport were in darkness;

You enlightened me to limelight,

Now i lodged there in darkness again;

Here i spanner myself alien.

Desolation enchafed me;

Arid impinge me.


I am living underact;

I casque castigate,

I need you.

Saturday, July 19, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
I wrote this poem when i just depart from my beloved just for half an hour. Actually i didn't write it at her departation but i wrote it without informing me she gone and that moment was out of my sense.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 05 August 2014

A lovely expression in an impressive poem.

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Shahzia Batool 20 July 2014

Welcome along with your first poem...it's arresting and quite intense...showing the immense poetry talent... Those who bring you to light from the chaos and darkness want a kind handling not an intense one, saying it as the context is provided by the poet's notes...keep writing!

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