I Need You Poem by Darkangel Flyfree

I also need you like you need me.............. This poem is different from the others this one is more imaginable while reading it i could imagine what you're saying... the words are well chosen so are the expressions....... Well this subject you chose and the way you wrote it could've been more prolonged i would've loved if you made it a little more it's not hard you could add as a baby needs his mother....... a car needs petrol ....... nature needs stability.......... i don't know you could make it more imaginary i hope you don't take it as an offence PS: I loved your poem but you could've added more expressions easily but it is still excellent Good work This is the best poem of yours i read until now Guess Who

beautiful piece. you first line needs checking. i think u intended to say sand and not sad.

very beautiful....blessings