I Need A Smoke. Poem by Tyler Tillett

I Need A Smoke.



In my hand is a bloody pare of

scissors. My wrists are bleeding. The

pain feels so go. All I hear is the

dog snoring and the cat purring, and

music going. I can’t hear people

laughing in the background. There is a

puddle of blood on my bed. I am just

sitting there. I just want to die.

I feel like dying. I don’t want to

be helped. I don’t know why I was

brought in to this world. My heart is

tarn in so many peaces, it hurts. My

stomach hurts. I feel hot. I don’t

know why. I want to die. My stomach

hurts because know one loves me and I

should have no right to live.

I am not happy. I feel like everyone

hates me. I can feel the fire going

threw my vain. I feel like I am the

house being on fire, and that the fire

is just seeking out to the out side.

To burn. I feel like I am not loved. I

can’t get a boyfriend and everyone

feels sorry for me. I am missing some

thing. And that something is what I

can’t have. I found it but then I let

him go. Nothing makes me happy. Not

friends, not family. I feel like I

don’t exist anymore. There is

something that I don’t have that I

need in order to survive. I must have

him. Other wise I am nothing. Not a

spider, not even a ghost, and not the

devil. I feel like I need a smoke. I

need it.


Tyler Tillett

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Michael Pruchnicki 17 February 2008

Tyler, light up and lighten up, for Christ's sake and your own bleeding sake!

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Nadushka Delrio 26 April 2008

You have a way with your words.and you have a way with showing your emotions and writing them.I can TOTALLY relate to what you were feeling. great job

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joelle lauren Phillips 04 April 2008

a blast of emotion. wise choice of words. i feel it. very nice.

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Celine Socrates 10 March 2008

full of angst. you describe things well and I can almost feel what you're feeling. well done!

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Kyle Schaerffer 08 March 2008

very great poem, i love it, all you need to work on is spelling errors and seperating each line with a space.

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Rae Rae 07 March 2008

dang! ! ! but i know how that feels. that was beoned words

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