*i Need A Miracle....I Need U* Poem by SmashLey Sweetie Simons

this is amazing i hoe you contue to rite=)

i <3 it! ! ! \^-^/ the way u wrote this had a flow that was sooo smoothe.... and it looks like it could be a saong :) 2300++

I love it. I can relate to everyting. Good job

I love this poem. It's so true. :) :) :) :) :) :) :) Never stop! ! ! ! PLZ NEVER STOP WRITING! ! !

i love this...i can relate to this poem in many ways...wonderul colors of love showing through...and a sadness like dark spots around the precious edges of what you hold dear...keep writing^^ it was a joy to read this one: p

very personal and raw. your projections on this poem are quite clear. as for your style, you seem to add a spice of order into your apparent chaotic writing. Well done =D

very well done poem very nice very emotional good job :)