I Miss You More Poem by Manonton Dalan

I Miss You More

Rating: 5.0


unending wind kissing my face
even my eyes close; there it is
i see waving grass as it pass
so as leaves waving as fast
i look up to see bluish sky
dots of many wings passing by

where were you on those moments
have you felt passing too; laments
maybe you're sleep walking on clouds
over those pretty cumulous; big suds
ah! i am thinking should i be always
give me smile; your best; yes please

Monday, July 7, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ena N. Mori 02 March 2016

I rated this a 10 but didn't show up. Sorry, I need to retrain.

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Manonton Dalan 03 March 2016

thank you very much it did show up...it's just very slow

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Manonton Dalan

Manonton Dalan

virginia, usa
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