I Miss You Poem by Jessel Jane Tevar Toring

I Miss You

Rating: 5.0


Whatever heaven it is in your eyes,
I saw it promising beneath the lies.
Although it still is heaven, or hell
or whatever it is...your smile confirmed it all;
that whatever befalls my heart will fall.
So tell me what lies within your pretty lips
that caught me off guard-
tell me what lies within your pretty smile
that captured my soul apart.
Whatever paradise it is in your eyes,
I saw it glorious inspite the lies.
Although it might be heaven, or hell
or whatever it is...your tender look confirmed;
that when I looked back at my heart...
it spoke the words untold.
I miss you.
I miss the heaven I found in your eyes,
in that extraordinary night.
I miss the paradise in your eyes
in that simply glorious night:
A night I'll keep forever...
keeps me haunting forever without end.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 27 April 2020

Although it might be heaven, or or whatever it is...your tender look confirmed; that when I looked back at my heart... it spoke the words untold. I miss you. i miss the heavens and the paradise i found in you..... you are a wonderful romantic person. almost all your poems speak it out. thank you. tony

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Ency Bearis 04 November 2008

a true love well expressed...nice write for the soul mate...lovely... thumbs up 10 Ency Bearis

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