I Miss Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

I Miss

Rating: 4.9


You may call me dear
Agony and pain you bear
No complaints or words I hear
Why not you make it very clear?

You always guided me as sun beam
Projected work as complete team
Life would have been utterly failure
If you had not made it fully secure

I am paying it very dearly
I miss the death very nearly
Cry from distance makes me upset
Nothing seems right from the outset

I may not deliver any good
My promises may not serve as tonic for food
How to prove and show the earnest feeling?
I can’t shed the tears even if willing?

The world, people and nature will laugh at me
They will find it as stage to be enjoyed free
Can we not present its beautiful look?
This s only way to come out of hook

Let not any one notice the plight?
We may not separate or go out of sight
What is the reason feel bad or fight?
We may choose what we feel is right

I am visibly moved
My apprehensions still not removed
I am carried away by the simple sentiments
They are not sad but glorious moments

Love is to give and sacrifice
Words may not prove or suffice
It will be simple trajectory of mind
May prove any time its essence and kind

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brendon Carey 08 November 2009

How to prove and show the earnest feeling? I can’t shed the tears even if willing? - I can see the other side of things from this perspective thank you for recommending

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Pitilosi Mdala 09 November 2009

You may call me dear, Agony and pain you bear, no complaints or words I hear, Why not you make it.WOO! man this real ting no doubt about it

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Nivedita Bagchi SPC UK 09 November 2009

‘…Love is to give and sacrifice…’ Diamonded adage forgotten mostly, poetically you crammed into me. Thanks Sir Ten++ niv Please grace with your comments &c to my posts [new too] niv

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Louis Rams 17 November 2009

love is to give and sacrifice. very well put. a ten

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Adriana Ellis 01 December 2009

This one is my favorite

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Yll L 22 April 2010

wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! i love the rhyming playing with it stunningly... the thoughts how it erodes....

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Iron Panda 23™ 23 March 2010

this is great! !

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Unwritten Soul 27 February 2010

Love is to give and sacrifice Words may not prove or suffice It will be simple trajectory of mind May prove any time its essence and kind ...yes i love this one, this is real unwritten soul...love it 10+++

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Precious Arroyo 31 January 2010

this is a great poem you have a great way with words i give this poem 10+++

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Adam Reed 26 January 2010

very strong ending to a powerful poem. good tone and mood setting. good job hasmukh

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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