Treasure Island

Sianna Leed


I'm so deeply sorry.


I'm so sorry for lying
I'm sorry that you don't trust me
I'm sorry that life sucks
I'm sorry that every time I'm with you
-I want to just fall into a deep sleep.
I'm sorry that you feel this way
I'm sorry that you are so different
I'm sorry that you feel every things changed
And am sorry if I hurt you but...
I'm not sorry that you missed out of what could of
-been the story of our lives.
And I'm definitely sorry that you feel
-like our friendship was a huge lie.

Submitted: Sunday, October 20, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, October 22, 2013

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Poet's Notes about The Poem

This poem is about a story of two friends that are yet so different and so far from each other that they don't have a clue of what's going on in each others lives but seem to like questioning each others loyalty. So does that mean their friendship is a complete lie?

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  • John Westlake (5/24/2014 4:43:00 PM)

    An interesting question you have raised in your notes here. When two people live so far apart, it's very hard to know what the other is doing. It's easier to lie to someone when they live a long way away and more difficult to trust them. If you can't trust your friend, then it is a lie. Stay strong (Report) Reply

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