I'M Done Poem by Lawrence S. Pertillar

I'M Done



Once efficiently conditioned,
To submit and sit to vision...
Myself fitting in positions,
That for me had limited.
And with no 'buts' I am done...
Running from dreams,
To let those nightmares come my way.
I say,
I am done...
Running away from all my wishes and hopes,
To mope with frowns looking down...
With woes-stacked-on-my-back,
Today!

And once again I say,
I wont be chased away with a doing to pursue...
To fool anybody,
Today.

I'm done...
Running away from my wishes and hopes,
To mope...
To prove,
I can do it...
Today!

Once efficiently conditioned,
To submit and sit to vision...
Myself fitting in positions,
That for me had limited.
But I am done...
Running from dreams,
To let those nightmares come my way.
I say,
I-am-done...
Running away from my wishes and hopes,
To mope around with woes...
Today!

I am done.
So done,
From running from my wishes and my hopes...
Just to mope with a woeing today.

Said I'm done.
So done,
From running from my wishes and my hopes...
Just to mope with a woeing today.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Don Nguyen 25 June 2013

You are not done, talented you! Fight and have fun, just ask Spirit leaf! i just tart having fun. I am done writing my Lord's poems. Now i am going to write mine. Freely! ! ! !

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