! ! ! I'M Conversing With 'The Time' (01-01-2009 00.10 A.M.) ! ! ! Poem by kite remedy

! ! ! I'M Conversing With 'The Time' (01-01-2009 00.10 A.M.) ! ! !

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night sky I stare at
'ends, now it ends'
i murmur and be still
be silent and tranquil
'oh time, you'll soon pass by'
'could you stop a while? '
'let me tell you a story'
'one that you never hear'

(I have a friend so kind
one that I'll never find
one that others may befriend
one that there for me till its end

we shared our smile
had our laughter for some while
had our face toward the sky
had our days and our nights

we shared our tears,
what we hate and fear
what we cry for is
what we lose and miss

we shared our dreams,
hopes we brought to real
hopes we love the most
hopes we're not to lose

we shared mistakes
hopes we've lost and faked
hopes we've failed to achieve
hopes we've gone to believe

we shared the truth
as honest as we could
as painful as it would
as sweet, then it should

we shared our lies
to make up what we lack
to cover the weakness up
from reality, we've tried to hide

we shared our days
our choice, our ways
under the sun, we've played
run along a long bay

we shared our nights
and rested side by side
and slept with the dim light,
but dreamed with no fright

we shared our memories
and wrote them on a list
so that when we miss
we have a way to reminisce

we shared our world
and we grew more tired and old
and we experienced what we were told
and we folded it in our memory books)

'time, oh time..'
'how's the story of mine? '
'is it worth hearing? '
'or is it uninteresting? '
'if it were great,
would you mind to repeat
your journey
just for me? '
'not for long, maybe ten minutes'
'there's someone I'd like to meet'
'a person I told you about'
'a person I told you out loud'
'in my story, there he is'
'in my memory, there he is'
'but in reality, there he was'
'in reality, he is a past'
'so let me meet him'
'just to greet'
'and thank and sorry
directly...'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sarah Sisson 09 January 2009

Love and friendship...welled penned dear!

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Anjali Sinha 09 January 2009

nice--- you shared so many things-- thanks for sharing this poem with me

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Min Sia 04 January 2009

Truly amazing..of deepest emotion and passion.. Great conversation..expressive words..and really impressive.. Love this poem..it's beautiful!

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Estrella Baldemosa 03 January 2009

unpredictable...exotic. good job!

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Subbaraman N V 03 January 2009

Absolutely a great conversation with the fleeting time!

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