I Loved You Poem by Dead Inside

I Loved You



i smile when i see your face
yet u get up and walk away
i tell u i need you
yet you say its not true

you left me alone
and there i sat at home
you told me to move on
so i tried to drowned myself in a pond

i told you i would never let go
but u told me there was no hope
i cried and cried out my eyes
but u just told me it was all lies

here i sit bleeding out
and i hear u shout
here i sit about to die
and i hear u ask why

i look up to you
and you ask 'why boo'
i try to speak but im to far gone
you whisper in my ear
im sorry dear
but i loved you

Tuesday, May 6, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: sad love
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
i feel in love with a guy and he told me to move on...... i could not and tried as hard as i could to move on but i lost it and tried to kill myself but that night he showed up and this is just what happened
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Payal Parande 07 July 2014

oh honey why? i won't say that life is a gift and don't waste it like that and anything cause i know it does feel like a pathetic gift and life is never nice to us it is cruel and why well because we are cruel to it you are a smart girl i know you are, you write brilliant poems so you must be brilliant i know you are... hope everything work out

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