I Love You Until My Death… Poem by JoDonna Lapahie

I Love You Until My Death…

Rating: 4.3


*You over heard me on the phone
*Saying there’s nothing here for me
*I know I hurt you so bad
*And I pray to god he sends me to hell
It started with just a txt then I said it feels like you don’t want me to love you
Then you said you were sitting there crying
Well I talked to you just awhile ago and you said your feeling were sad
So you got me writing this song from the bottom of my hart for you
*So let me hold you one more time
*And chase those blue days out your hart

*Oh I saw you next to the pool table
*And oh my god you were the prettiest thing
-I’ve ever seen- [course]
Oh you make me feel like a kid again
Oh I love you until my death
Oh I love you until my death

That night you said you’ll pick me up in the morning
And oh my god I was excited
About 2: 45 in the afternoon you seen me by the road
*I was so happy to see you again
*Too see you again
*And hold you in my arms
I tried to kiss you but you said no
I feel so stupid for still trying to kiss you

*I don’t think
*Well ever be the same
*Like we use too
Oh I love you until my death
Oh I love you until my death
*oh baby
*my sweet baby
*I love you until my death

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Blue Eyes 20 November 2008

i love it especially the last part.

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Howard Johnson 14 November 2008

Nice piece, JoDonna, Enjoyed reading, and liked its message, , thank you for sharing..

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Great poem. Intense and wonderful!

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Julian Salvacion 10 November 2008

very romantic! ! ! at a young age you'd go a long way.10+ for me

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