I'Ll Wait Poem by Kylee Bartz

I'Ll Wait

Rating: 4.3


I'll wait. And wait. And wait.
I'll wait for him to come.
I'll wait for him to save me.

My Romeo.
My Edward Cullen.
My knight in shining armor.

I've been waiting for a while now.
I'll wait a while more.
I'll wait until my hero comes to save me.

As I wait, I lose faith.
My hopes are dying every second.
Like a flower, they die so quickly.

I'll wait a little longer.
I'll wait just one more night.
I'll wait just one more night.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nerisha Kemraj 11 May 2010

u are quite good hey - don't u think u should save some of your poetry - to really publish a book one day - reap the rewards. we don't really gate paid here. this is where we are recognised though - free advertisng lol

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Pranab K Chakraborty 11 May 2010

perhaps your night is over. So don't waste time by waiting further, rather try to acquire strength to save other at least weak fellows as your associates.

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Afzal Shauq 01 June 2010

awesome...a sweet poem with rich idea..well done

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Iron Panda 23™ 12 May 2010

beautifullll! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Yoni Assis 11 May 2010

Nice, but I could have done without the 'Edward Cullen, ' but you're a teenybopper, so I can't rag on you too much. I wrote something similar to this called Where Is She? Check it out when you get a chance.

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KYLEE BARTZ 11 May 2010

im not waiting. heh, i made the whole thing up as if i was.

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Tobias Gray 11 May 2010

i must say you are very good! keep up the good work!

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Kylee Bartz

Kylee Bartz

Attica, New York
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