I'Ll Show You Mine If You Show Me Your's First Poem by Silence Dogood

I'Ll Show You Mine If You Show Me Your's First

Rating: 5.0


I'll show you mine if show me yours first
Lets compare scars I'll tell you whose is worst.
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Life is like a game and we are the pawns
But Ive played this game for far too long.
Im tired of the secrets and past mistakes.
Every dissapointment is too much to take.

Im tired of failure of breaking apart.
Pulling down my sleeve to cover these scars.
My mouth is etched into a perfect frown.
Invisible hands are holding me down.

Criss crossed patterns across my wrists.
Blood dripping from scarlett slits.
I feel so empty so utterly alone.
And all I want is for this feeling to go.

Ive been around this board so many times.
I feel like this life is barely mine.
Condemded to death by pain so hard to bear.
Tired of living in a world so unfair.

Taking a razor to end the pain.
Only to feel an unbearable blame.
A cutting knife to a broken heart.
My shoulders heave as I fall apart.

So you want to compare scars.
While take a look at my heart.
Do you think yours are worst.
While why dont you go first.

Im sure you'll see that you cannot win.
I have as many scars as skeletins.
My broken heart is the worst of the pain.
The scars are just part of the shame.

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I'll show you mine if you show me your's first.
Lets compare scars I'll tell you whose is worst.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 15 November 2008

The scars are just part of the shame. that line is so good. this poem is so powerful. I love it! I am going to adding to my favs. *Purkey Girl*

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Saint Cynosure 15 November 2008

yet another great piece Kyla

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