Jayne Davies

Rookie - 130 Points (5th October 1960 / Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff)

I'll Hold You Close


Distant memories lost in time,
I close my eyes and think of you.
Memories of the way we were,
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I wrote this poem a few months back, it's dedicated to my Mum Amy who passed away four years ago. Always in my thoughts xx

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  • Rookie - 130 Points Jayne Davies (3/27/2014 12:15:00 PM)

    Thank you everyone for your kind comments, regarding this poem!
    So pleased to have made Poem of the day x I may have confused some!
    Not sure what all the question marks are for? When I say that we will meet again,
    I'm talking about a better place, in Heaven which I do believe there is such a place.
    Nothing confusing really, I'm always open to any critiscism. Thanks again xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 784 Points Jasbir Chatterjee (3/25/2014 11:06:00 PM)

    Congrats on being poem of the day! The last line brings a very interesting twist...well written indeed! Lovely tribute! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 29 Points Colleen Courtney (3/25/2014 11:16:00 AM)

    Such a beautifully written piece of a daughter's love for her Mom. Totally relate having lost my own mom ten ears ago. Miss our walks and talks, then heading home for tea for her and coffee for me! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 259 Points Jack Growden (3/25/2014 8:56:00 AM)

    Fantastic! SImple but meaningful. Well done. Feel free to read my collection and comment your thoughts, thanks, Jack Growden (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 221 Points John Shea (3/25/2013 8:23:00 PM)

    I play a song for mama on the juke box every Mothers day by boyzs to men and tell her this one is for you. Miss her so much..love is never lost (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 314 Points Hardik Vaidya (3/25/2013 2:18:00 AM)

    Jayne Davies after reading your poem, I am convinced your mother was a very special person. (Report) Reply

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