I'Ll Go On Loving You... Poem by Patricia Gale

I'Ll Go On Loving You...

Rating: 5.0


When the seas have all vanished
And the rivers run no more
I'll go on loving you

When the last tree falls and no one hears
The last rose petal lingers to its stem
I'll go on loving you

When the last of souls is left upon this land
And the robins sing no more
I'll go on loving you

When the sun refuses to shine
And the forest green turns to brown
I'll go on loving you

When the sky turns dark as death
And stars no longer shine
I'll go on loving you

When my final breath draws nigh
And my heart beats its final time
I'll go on loving you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

A splendid write, Patricia...Vivid imagery, and a heartful of passion... FjR

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Mitchell Greenwood 24 April 2007

I love it! Terrific write.........

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This is such a passionate poem and your strength is so firm and loving. Beautiful words from a wonderful poet. Karin Anderson

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Con Nie 02 February 2008

Beautiful poem. Sincerely, Connie Webb

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Michael Fischer 02 May 2007

Love that lasts forever...there's nothing like it! Good work! Top marks! -Michael

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Nimal Dunuhinga 27 April 2007

It's really a sacrifice in this complicated journey.

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Geoff Warden 25 April 2007

Ever the seasons of such ETERNAL Love........as per your usual stelar.....

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