I’ll Give... Poem by Krupa ...

I’ll Give...

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'I'll give you the moon at night

I'll give you star that lights your eyes

I'll give you the sun that made just one more dawn
So another day may come

I'll give you my heart and soul

I'll be there to catch you when you fall

When you ask me what I give to you
I'll give it all'

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Emancipation Planz 20 June 2009

Krystal, I wonder if you 'read' your poems out aloud when you outpour them: I'll give you starS that light() your eyes (s) Give yourself the opportunity to do so.... you will 'catch' the music of your word flow... BTW.. the poem IS 'the simplicity of love'...

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