I Just Realized Poem by Victoria Ayres

I Just Realized



I just realized
I don't care
I just realized
You're unfair
You should go before I snap.
I just realized
That you're mean
I just realized
You're obscene
You need to go, cause that's a wrap.

Cause I just realized I don't like who
You are or what you do
I just realized you're not okay
So go away, just go away!

I just realized
You tried to use me
I just realized
Who you could be
You should stop telling lies.
I just realized
You could die
I just realized
I wouldn't cry
Because it's you I truly despise.

Cause I just realized I don't like who
You are or what you do
I just realized you're not okay
So go away! just go away today.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Brandon Owens 06 May 2010

I really like the feeling of this poem, I think you have the ability to express it a little more sophisticatedly. I think you should take the time to try and rewrite this one. Maybe use the repetition to build the rhythm a little better, in some places it gets broken up.

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