Waseem A Malla

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I Hope: One Day Poem by Waseem A Malla


You will be mine forever,
That all along the way,
There will be blessings showered,
And flowers blossoming, for me.

I hope one day,
My life will be pretty,
For it’ll have a possession of you,
And you’ll be mine, forever,
Deep and down in my heart, always.

I hope one day,
My mind will suffer the intoxication,
Of the love, of the growing nearness,
And of diminishing distances,
Between you and me, forever.

I hope one day,
It’ll be just two of us,
A beautiful you and an unknown me,
In the evening, by the seashore,
Lit by a thousand candles,
And by the evening heavens,
With the moon and a million stars,
Just to wish us love; immortal,
For all the days to come.

I hope that one day,
You’ll become me, one forever…!

Submitted: Friday, August 23, 2013
Edited: Monday, August 26, 2013

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  • Bronze Star - 2,141 Points S.zaynub Kamoonpuri (2/26/2014 8:44:00 AM)

    Wow very dreamy poem for future love. Written in a commendable poetic style. Great to read.
    Maybe u cud just read my latest too on 'selectin relaxation, (on prayer's power) . Coments arent vital. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 112 Points Maria C. Pires Costa (8/31/2013 2:17:00 PM)

    Beautiful, heartfelt thread, fraught with much love and all hopeful closeness to the beloved. I've so much enjoyed the natural/romantic elements pervading the poem along with some hints of heavenly blessings.
    I'm joining the moon and a million stars to wish you much happiness! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (8/23/2013 10:56:00 AM)

    aren't you the most romantic guy...more like a romeo just don't kill yourself...live yourself for you for her...beautiful write as always (Report) Reply

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