I Hope Poem by Shyuki Nawaii

I Hope

Rating: 5.0


I hope
We can be like this forever
I hope
We can holding hands each other
I hope
We can hugs each other
I hope
We can smile together
I hope
We can laugh together
I hope
This will be everlasting for both of us
I hope we can be like this
Every second,
Every minute,
Every hour,
Every day,
Every week,
Every year,
Because I know,
Deep in your heart,
You also hope the same thing as me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lily Law 25 February 2009

I wish it as well... Nice work... ^-^

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Eddie Roa 20 January 2009

This piece can improve much more with the straightening of some grammatical kinks which is understandable coming from someone where English is not the mother tongue. Nice sentiment expressed candidly and spontaneously.

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 20 January 2009

Your hope is my wish.Nice first piece Shyuki.

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